Hi,
Here is the updated version of my poem.
Tuesday, August 24, 2021
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Positive - Something done well.
Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say.
Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about.
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Amazing descriptive writing May. I love the imagery you have created. Can you now recraft it and put your ideas in a different order to have maximum impact?
ReplyDeleteHi May,
ReplyDeleteWhat a fabulous piece of descriptive writing, you have chosen some very interesting vocabulary. I will look forward to seeing what you do next with your recrafting.